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Thursday, 18 February 2016

Where is my happy place

Where is my happy place?

Where the sun glares 
into the eyes of the forest 

Where flax dances
and sways In the wind 

Where cabbage trees stand 
tall and strong with his brothers 

Where the river plays hide and seek 
with me because every time I go there 
it seems like a different place.

That is my happy place.

2 comments:

  1. I like it how you used personification, like we're the flax dances and sways in the wind. I think this is a good peace of writing.
    😊👍🏻

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  2. Perfect writing Jack. You used strong words and you dragged me in to the story I felt like I was there with you. Spot on👌🌲

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